a butterfly
cavorting in endless summers
a deer drinking spring waters
soon sprinting away from danger
a worm ever struggling
in darkness
I am
in this dream
my exile
holding on to hope –
I will awake at the appointed hour
and live eternal life.
It is Quadrille Monday in Dverse Poets’ Pub and De, Whimzygizmo, invites folks to write a 44 word poem using the word “Dream”. I invite you to join in the fun by linking your 44 words and/or simply checking out the works of talented writers. 🙂
Today is a holy day for us, this being the Feast of the Assumption. The significance of the feast for me is a source of inspiration for this poem.
I am also joining Cee’s Black and White Photo Challenge which this week is about any topic. These pictures were from yesterday while I was walking around, keeping my toddler company. I saw a clump of oregano in the field and decided to take random pictures of the flowers until I realized that it was a haven for this type of tiny butterfly. I remember trying to focus on three butterflies until my boy’s impatient hands grabbed the leaves where the butterflies were perched. Oh well.
Happy Tuesday. 🙂
There will always be something fairy like about butterflies, what they see in nature 🙂
butterflies are fairies in disguise, I think. 🙂
I agree 🙂
So beautifully written, Emilia. Can’t stop reading it.
Until you awaken to eternal life…sort of like the butterfly coming out of its chrysalis. A lovely thought about butterflies and eternity
Ow, that’s a nice comparison, Toni. I did not see it until you mentioned it. 🙂
Sometimes we do need other eyes to look at our poetry especially that which comes from our hearts. I know I often will read a comment and go wow….I actually wrote that!
So true. It is in this light that I get to appreciate DVerse group a lot. What a wonderful group of people it has. Thanks for the help with your comments. 🙂
Thank you for your poetry!
Oh your photos (both black and white and color) are simply divine. 😀
Thanks, Cee.
I liked the metamorphosis into eternal life.
Until you folks mentioned it, I did not notice the link. Thanks.
Love the thought of such a metamorphosis… such it has to be I think
Thanks, Bjorn.
I especially love the slight separation of “I will” from the rest.
Your photos are gorgeous.
Thanks, De.
Lovely photos and poem Imelda! ❤
Thanks, Amy. 🙂
Beautiful words accompanied with beautiful visions of nature. Thank you.
Thanks, Beverly. 🙂
Beautifully done!
Anna :o]
Thanks. 🙂
Simply beautiful Imelda
Thanks. Wendell. 🙂
Those photos! Awesome post.
Thanks, Brenda. 🙂
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