The clock strikes the hour for him to come through the door
My hands are trembling. I wonder who I’ll meet today
I pray that time would stop even a second before –
My wish is simple and I am wishing for nothing more
Not love. Not beauty. My broken spirit has not much to say
The clock strikes the hour for him to come through the door
I would fly right into his arms in the days of yore
If I had grown wings I’d now hasten to fly away
I pray that time would stop even a second before
I hear his footsteps thundering on the floor
So I could scamper like a mouse to get out of his way
The clock strikes the hour for him to come through the door
But maybe, today brings the man I used to adore
And he will kiss all those years of my heartaches away
I pray that time would stop even a second before
My body can bear his brute purple reign no more
My soul leaves its bloodied shell that on the floor now lays
The clock struck the hour for him to come through the door
I wished that time had stopped even a second before.
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This post was written for a poetry prompt in Instagram (Purple reign) and as inspired by a tragic domestic violence article that I read online several days before. You can find the Instagram entry here. Thank you for coming by.
Compelling piece. How sad.
As one who has worked with women in a shelter, I find your words speak clearly for women who remain mute from fear. Your image in this posting is powerful.
Thanks for your perspective, Brenda. Much appreciated. 🙂
This is beautiful Imelda.
Thanks, COlline. 🙂
The voice of fearful tragedy cries out…no more!
How good it will be if persons in that situation really cries out no more and seek safety.
Thanks, Lynn. 🙂
Good description of fear that replaces a former closeness in couples. Nice villanelle.
This is so sad, and the form with its repetition captures the fear and the angst very well…
Thanks, Bjorn.
This is heartbreaking! Hope such tales will come to an end some days. Sigh. The villanelle is well crafted.
Thanks, Sumana. 🙂
I enjoyed this and especially the deeper meaning that the word “struck” took on toward the end of the piece.
The juxtaposition of the wings is so effective. This is wonderfully written.
Thanks, Jilly. 🙂
Powerful voice & the one issue I also strongly support – stop violence against women ~
A tragic tale for sure, Imelda. But your presentaion in form tells the story so well. Thanks for this.
Thanks, Walter.
This captures domestic violence in a most compelling way, AND in villanelle form!
Thanks, Beverly.
But maybe, today brings the man I used to adore
And he will kiss all those years of my heartaches away
How one clamors for the true love without the intrusion of fear. Beautiful Villanelle Imelda
http://imagery77.blogspot.my/2017/06/ever-remembered-when-one-was-in-nursery.html
Hank
Thanks, Hank. 🙂
Powerfully written, and sadly all too apt. But these things MUST be written.