Writing for DVERSE POETS’s PUB’s prompt to write a lai poem and @transatlantic’s wonderwall prompt for this week. Thanks Victoria of DVerse for giving us this prompt.
Thanks for dropping by. 🙂
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Ah, young love … got lai’d!
Thanks, Beverly. 😊
Wow…slayed!
Thanks, Lynn. 😊
The beauty of love that endures so beautifully expressed in the form.
Thanks, Victoria. 😊
Nice love lai!
Thanks, Frank. 😊👍
Thanks is beautiful! I love it. I like the photo in the background, too.
I meant to say “This is beautiful.” 🙂
Thanks. I am glad you liked them. 😊
the wonders of love in so few words…
Love how you set them poem… great vow
A lovely love lai 🙂
So refreshing to read of enduring love these day….very nice, Imelda 😉
Thanks, Kathy. 😊
“You are my prayer and vow.” LOVE this!
Beautifully done! The question in the center is brilliant – it moves you from one thought to the next flawlessly.
Love the entire poem specially, you are my prayer and vow !!!
Okay, I’m probably reading too much into everyone’s poems. I see a theme lurking around every corner; or perhaps I’m loath to take things at face value. I see a deeper, higher love being hinted at in the wording. Tell me if I’m wrong (I’ve been wrong many times; you won’t hurt my feelings). Even if unintended, it says much if something spiritual seems to be shining behind the scenes.
Oh, thanks for the feedback, Charley. 😊 Frankly, I was just focused on completing this piece (my husband as muse), putting words like jigsaw puzzle pieces that other considerations were out of my head. I was a bit wary with using “adore” though because it is something beyter reserved for God. 😁
Lovely lines
Thank you, Nikki. 🙂
Can feel you meant it every word — there’s a lucky man. How warming and poised.
The first three lines just stole my heart. A beautiful poem!