DEAREST

Posted byImeldaPosted inFamily, personal, Picture Wall, Poems, PoetryTags:, , , ,
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Writing for DVERSE POETS’s PUB’s prompt to write a lai poem and @transatlantic’s wonderwall prompt for this week. Thanks Victoria of DVerse for giving us this prompt.

Thanks for dropping by. šŸ™‚

27 thoughts on “DEAREST”

  13. Okay, I’m probably reading too much into everyone’s poems. I see a theme lurking around every corner; or perhaps I’m loath to take things at face value. I see a deeper, higher love being hinted at in the wording. Tell me if I’m wrong (I’ve been wrong many times; you won’t hurt my feelings). Even if unintended, it says much if something spiritual seems to be shining behind the scenes.

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    1. Oh, thanks for the feedback, Charley. šŸ˜Š Frankly, I was just focused on completing this piece (my husband as muse), putting words like jigsaw puzzle pieces that other considerations were out of my head. I was a bit wary with using “adore” though because it is something beyter reserved for God. šŸ˜

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