Dark clouds gather
thunder rumbles in the distance
dark clouds gather
in his eyes, emotions flicker
the flames of a summer romance
slow dancing to Betrayal’s dance
Dark clouds gather.
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writing for Poetry Challenge #45: A Summer Storm by Jane Dougherty
Great sense of impending disaster 🙂
Love the dense clouds. Wonderful photo.
Lovely atmosphere of let down and the dance was a magic touch.
Just beautiful.
Thanks, Brenda. 🙂
Love this one, Imelda! Sorry I couldn’t leave a comment before—Akismet had me locked up as a spammer.
No worries, Jane. 🙂 I guess, being a WP blogger, some of my comments are tossed in somebody’s spam folder, too. And thank you very much for the visit and the comments. 🙂
Akismet seems to be going berserk at the moment!
Like the way the clouds shift from being actual to metaphorical as you move through the rondelet. Nicely done.
Thank you, Sarah. 🙂