Dark clouds gather
thunder rumbles in the distance
dark clouds gather
in his eyes, emotions flicker
the flames of a summer romance
slow dancing to Betrayal’s dance
Dark clouds gather.
~~~
writing for Poetry Challenge #45: A Summer Storm by Jane Dougherty
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Great sense of impending disaster 🙂
Love the dense clouds. Wonderful photo.
Lovely atmosphere of let down and the dance was a magic touch.
Just beautiful.
Thanks, Brenda. 🙂
Love this one, Imelda! Sorry I couldn’t leave a comment before—Akismet had me locked up as a spammer.
No worries, Jane. 🙂 I guess, being a WP blogger, some of my comments are tossed in somebody’s spam folder, too. And thank you very much for the visit and the comments. 🙂
Akismet seems to be going berserk at the moment!
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Like the way the clouds shift from being actual to metaphorical as you move through the rondelet. Nicely done.
Thank you, Sarah. 🙂