FORM FOR ALL: The Cinquain

RAIN

Rain falls

like butterflies

dancing on piano keys

Rain caressed  Earth yields  its music

life springs.

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The form this week is the Cinquain as invented by Adelaide Crapsey.  Please visit DVERSE POETS’ PUB for  more Cinquain.  Thank you for coming by. 🙂

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19 comments

  1. Two beautiful images combined in a super poem. My only hesitation is the title, which is also the first word of the poem. It might be better to have a different title – although right now I can’t come up with a good alternative.

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