OH! LITTLE DAISY

Little drops of snow
filling autumn’s landscape
you leave dusk aglow
with your chaste starry shape.

Your soft golden core
glows gently in the sun
like a smile so pure
you cheer the lonely one.

But how could your beauty
be sullied by that stench
that only the humble bee
drinks deeply of your scent?

I am joining DP Challenge this week:

Your challenge this week is fairly straightforward as far as rules go: write about whatever you’d like, incorporating metaphor and/or simile to illustrate and highlight important parts of your story. If you’d like something more advanced, take the bull by the horns and attempt an epic simile, an extended simile that runs for several lines.

Please click the link for more responses. πŸ™‚

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