WAITING

Leaves

My shriveled hand waves to the breeze -
“Come, kiss me good night
cradle me in your arms
lay me down gently
on my earthen bed
where Snow will tuck me in
under her white sheets.

Days have been long,
nights, even longer
with no company
but the chill creeping
in my bones.

My home is silent
if not for the whistling wind
lamenting the days
when its mere whisper
triggered the merry dancing
of the leaves.

O Sun and Moon
keep me under your watch
as I wait on Time.
Why does it take so long
for me to find rest
in Earth’s bosom?

___________

Linking with DVerse Poets’ Poetics-Change and Turns.

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28 comments to WAITING

  1. claudia says:

    such a tender voice in this…and beautiful images…i hope that i can embrace death like that when my time comes..

  2. siggiofmaine says:

    WoW…as I was painting at the library in Somesville, I saw the scattered withered leaves still on the branches and thought there must be a poem in those leaves still hanging on…
    And HERE IT IS ! Thank you…a wonderful write…and excellent metaphor.
    Peace and best wishes for a wonderful New Year.

    • Imelda says:

      Thanks, Siggi for the kind words. :-) Those leaves helped me put my thoughts together about this theme which comes into my mind whenever I think of some beloved person.

  3. brian miller says:

    dang, i like this…evocative…to desire the rest of death so strong in this…to be tucked under the white sheets of winter….very nice…

  4. deanabo says:

    This was amazing. It gave me goosebumps. I so enjoy your work.

  5. jannatwrites says:

    The poem fits the picture perfectly. Our own wait to reach the earth isn’t much different from that of the few remaining leaves – all in good time.

  6. Absolutely exquisite description of the aloneness of again. I think this is the first time I’ve visited your blog and I’m so happy to discover your work.

  7. adinparadise says:

    Such lovely sentiments, Imelda.Your writing is exceptional. :)

  8. Kelvin S.M. says:

    ..i don’t know if my assessment’s right but i have a feeling of waiting for death… such a delicate and smooth way of waiting for the final moment… i’m impressed..excellent! happy new year.. smiles..

  9. Really beautiful …Diane

  10. what a magical words you mentioned. Thanks for sharing!! one question.. sorry to ask you but want to know that is this your own creativity ..?

  11. Diane Turner says:

    Stunning photo and beautiful words. Excellent work. Thanks for sharing.

  12. timkeen40 says:

    Wow! Great words and photo. Loved it.

    Tim

  13. Madhu says:

    So evocative and beautiful! To take inspiration from the mundane is in itself a special talent! Thanks Imelda.

  14. You have a beautiful way with words… this is the perfect accompaniment to the imagery above. Is that a painting, or a photograph? Either way, excellent work!

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